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Prussia x Reader
                                                          Prom Night
                                     You walked down the halls,looking for Gilbert,your best friend.He had said to meet you by the lockers after class.'Where IS he?',you thought. You decided to grab your things for your next class while you waited.
"Hey!Glad you decided to meet the AWESOME me here?!"You rolled your eyes at him as you shut the locker.
"Hey,Gil.What's up?",you said,shutting your locker and twisting the combination lock a couple times,to make sure it was locked.
"I just wanted to know if you wanted to go to prom with me." The halls fell silent,as if the whole world were awaiting your answer.
"Yeah,I'd love to!",you replied,smiling brightly,(e/c) orbs sparkling."What time do you want to meet up?"
"I'll just meet you there.",he said,a deep shade of red dusting his cheeks.
"'Kay then.I'll see ya later!"You turned and hurried to your French class.
"So did he ask you out?To prom,I mean.",asked Francis,who was another one of Gilbert's friends.
"He sure did!"You were beaming with happiness.You had this gigantic crush on him ever since seventh grade,but you never figured out how to tell him.
"Did you accept?",asked Arthur,who had been eavesdropping on the conversation.
"Yeah,I did!"Your cheeks started to turn pink.
                                         ~Gigantical time skip of doominess!~
                                 You hurried towards the doors of the school on prom night.You had barely made it there on time.
"Hey Gil...I made it...just barely though..."you breathed when you found the albino.
"Wow, you look almost as great as the awesome me!",he exclaimed,admiring your (e/c) dress and matching heels."You wanna hang around outside a bit?The heat is starting to get to me."You guessed he had been here awhile,because you saw beads of sweat dotting his forehead.
"Sure!",you replied,walking towards the doors.You were once again outside,sitting on the steps of the building.
"Can I tell you some thing important,Gil?",you asked,blushing lightly.He nodded.
"Well,I've had this crush on you,ever since seventh grade a-"You were interrupted by a pair of rough lips pressed against yours.You blushed immensely,before relaxing and sinking into the kiss.After a moment,you broke away,taking deep breaths.
"Ich liebe dich,(name).",he said gazing into your (e/c) eyes.
"Ich liebe dich auch.",you replied,smiling like a goofball.
END!
:iconinvadersharie:'s Prom night revamped. I really liked the ideas behind this piece, granted it is rather short and I prefer in show pairings... submitted for the Beta Mach-Making Contest!
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Artist
Wargh....DAvid moved the edited version of GerIta-Stronger to scraps because "it was not compliant with the contest rules."what bullcrap is that? 
Just thought I would tell you,my kindle won't let me go to your profile page...DAMN THE KINDLE!
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angelicdeamon96 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
It did the same to yours... Sorry I didn't tell you... I think it may have been on my part cuz there wasn't much to edit for you.... It was written very well my friend :iconlydz8d: wanted me to pass the same comment to you as well
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Artist
That just wasn't fair.dammit dA.
I'm glad they liked it!at least some people do,anyways.
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angelicdeamon96 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
I though so as well... maybe we weren't so much disqualified but just lost instead...
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Artist
hmm,never thought about THAT...you make a good point.
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Lydz8D Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
I didn't want to read this at first since my inbox ist full of stuff & I'm deleting anything that didn't immediately strike me. I was about to delete this, but then I saw Prussia x Reader & I was like "Hmm, possibly crack fanfiction & the awesome Prussia. Why not?"
I like how he didn't even bother getting & showing up with you; also, the albino part was my favorite. It's an alright read for a short fanfiction. Good job. :3
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Artist
I saw your comment!it makes me so happy to know you liked it!
This was actually a DARE from a friend of mine.She's a Prussia fan girl.
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Lydz8D Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
You're most welcome! It was a pretty good read for something so short, & I'm happy that you read that.
I like Prussia too, but I wouldn't call myself a fan girl. *shrugs*
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invadersharie Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Artist
Britain is better in my opinion.
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Lydz8D Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Everybody likes England, but for good reason.
I honestly have never really met a character in Hetalia that I disliked for any reason, but if I did have to pick a favorite (which ist relatively difficult for me since I never have one true favorite), I'd say Russia. Prussia's probably my second or third.
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